Saturday Spankings – Claire’s Cookies

Saturday Spankings


I’m a virgin!

Not really. But this is my first Saturday Spankings. 🙂

And this is my first written story.

(I just sent it in for editing.  Wish me luck!)


Meet Claire and Nick:

Claire is a 32 year old athlete, trying to qualify for the Olympic Trials.  She has a past full of emotional and physical injuries.

Nick is a 36 year old coach, a hard, authoritative man who pushes his athletes to their limit.

Claire is confused by her attraction to her new coach, feeling that he could never fall for a woman like her.  Will she stick around, accept what he has to offer, and finally learn to ask for what she wants, or will she run?

Will Nick learn to trust his instincts and guide Claire towards her goal and a possible future together, or will he shut down emotionally, and lose another woman in his life?


For my 8 sentences today, I am using a scene on the front porch of Claire’s apartment.  Nick and Claire have just finished their first dinner date, and he is dropping her off at her apartment.  Though Claire has acknowledged an interest in the “fetish” her roommate takes part in, she is too embarrassed to bring it into the open.

But with a nervous habit of speaking before thinking, she accidentally opens the door for some fun banter.


“Would you like to come in? I have some fresh spanked cookies. Baked, I meant baked cookies!”

She felt her face flush, but continued to babble. “My roommate used a wooden spoon – not for me, the cookies!”

She closed her eyes and waited for the ground to swallow her up.

Nick took her chin into his palm and slowly raised her to meet his eyes, “Are you inviting me in for spankings and sex, Claire?” he said quietly with a twinkle in his eyes.

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47 thoughts on “Saturday Spankings – Claire’s Cookies

  1. Dinah McLeod

    WOW, I literally laughed out loud! LOVE it! Too cute! And really, you already know this as it’s Friday, not even the weekend yet and you have five–make that six–reader comments!

  2. Tara Finnegan

    Great to see you here Katherine
    That snippet is so full of fun and humour that I really look forward to more. I can really feel her cringe as she speaks. Great premise too – sports practiced at a high level really require a good firm coach 😉

  3. Suzy

    Oh I so love this snippet. So cute and innocent and foot in mouth moment where he disregards it all and just pushes straight to the point. 😉

  4. Kathryn R. Blake

    That’s so embarrassing and too funny, and I love his question, which I’m sure will only embarrass her more. I greatly looking forward to reading more, Katherine, and welcome to Saturday Spankings.

  5. Pingback: Saturday Spankings – Claire gets warmed up. | Katherine Deane - Adventures in Romance

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