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Here is my second Saturday Spankings post from my WIP, Running For her Life.
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Brief update:
Claire and Nick have just finished their first team run together, and are trying to ignore the attraction that they feel for each other.
Nick introduces Claire to a new type of stretch, called PRE’s (Partner Resistant Exercises), giving a whole new meaning to the word “warm up”.
In this 8 sentence segment, Nick has just positioned Claire on her back, and is working her through the motions of deep stretching, causing her to rethink her “no dating the coach” rule.
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She was now in an inverted “L position”, feeling very vulnerable and excited, as he placed his hand lower on her thigh.
“Mm.” She barely held in the moan.
As he stroked the back of her leg, he explained, “I’m massaging out your hamstring, keeping the blood circulating, while trying to carefully push you into a deeper stretch.”
“Oh, Ok.” She swallowed, and felt her body heating as her heart pounded triple time.
She reveled in his attention and closed her eyes as every cell in her body danced with energy.
“Ok, now you do me.”
His words startled her, and she felt the heat creep to her cheeks.
She saw a hint of a smile as he pulled her up, and took her position on the towel, laying his legs out straight,“You. Do. Me.”
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Whew that was hot. Great sexual tension!
Thanks, Renee
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That was a nice little tease! 😉
Thanks! 🙂
I could picture this perfectly. And yes, a very vulnerable position indeed:) Well done!
Thanks, Trent!
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Suhweet snippet, Katherine!
Thanks, Sheri!
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Oh my… Wow. I really want to read this. Very sensual snippet
Yay! That’s what I was hoping for .
Thanks, Tara 🙂
M-hmmm…just massaging your hamstring…he’s so kind and thoughtful…no ulterior motives I’m sure!
You don’t want her to get a cramp, do you?
😉
Why do I suddenly feel like going to the gym? Great snippet.
I know, PK right!? I really want a stretching partner right now!
LOL, it could be a new line.
Walk up to a hot guy at the gym, and ask him,
“Hey baby, wanna do some P.R.E’s with me?”
😉
LOL, me too, PK!
Thanks 🙂
Love it! He’s such a tease!
Thanks, Casey 🙂
“You. Do. Me.” Those three words are perfect. I like the full stop after each word. It adds to the tension already building. Also, it makes me squirm in my seat. 🙂
Thanks so much, Alice!
I was really hoping that it was ok to write it that way.
I know it’s probably not grammatically correct, but that’s how I visualized it. 🙂
Hooray for the squirming! That makes me very happy 🙂
When writing, figure on following the rules for 98% of the time. Then have fun with that other 2%!
As a reader, I can say I knew exactly what you meant, and I think the delivery was awesome.
I think I like the 2% part! 🙂 Thanks, Alice! 🙂
Yes, great sexual tension.
Thanks so much, Cara!
The dialogue between these two is classic. Love it!
Thanks so much, Normandie!
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I actually smiled throughout and giggled at the end, great job! 😉
Thanks so much, Suzy!
What a fun idea for a story! So thoughtful of him to be concerned about her blood flow. 🙂
hehe, if her glutes get too tight, she will know whom to turn to. 🙂
Thanks, Celeste!
Oh Yum! I’d do him 🙂 Great snippet Katherine.
Thanks, Maddie! 🙂
I loved “her body danced with energy.”
Thanks so much, Starla!
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Wow. Very hot. I love the sexual tension.
Thanks, Daizie!
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Wonderful snippet, Katherine. Sensual and sexy, and dating the coach isn’t a bad thing. Right?
Thanks so much, Kathryn!
That’s what I’m hoping 🙂
Very sensual, Katherine:)
Thanks, Mary Sue!
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Lot’s of double meaning and sexual tension. I LOVED it Katherine 🙂
Thank you so much, Constance!
I had fun with that scene 🙂
I told you it was awesome 🙂 “You.Do.Me.” shiver worthy!
Thanks Dinah!
And thanks for the last minute editing help!
I was getting pretty nervous by Friday afternoon 🙂
wow! love it! absolutely hot!!!
Thanks, Joelle!
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Innuendo. Love it! You’re pretty good at this writing thing. 🙂
Thanks, Trish! I am going to take that as a huge compliment .
Thanks 🙂
Ooo! Heat creeping to the cheeks! That’s the best blush I’ve read in a long time!
Thanks, Emily!
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I have a feeling heat’s going to be creeping into her other cheeks pretty soon. Nice snippet!
Thanks, Angie!
LOL, I believe you are correct! 🙂
Oh my, lovely sexual tension! You do me. Yummy!
Thanks so much, Maren! 🙂